Wednesday, January 30, 2013

He

a love like birdsong,
found reason to be subscribed,
he rescues my pain


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This is dedicated to the love of my life ( though I doubt he will read this unless asked. and might not understand unless explained :P )

Written for Haiku Heights , Carpe diem , sunday scribblings


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20 comments:

  1. AnonymousJanuary 30, 2013 at 1:45 AM

    I laughed at your dedication. Murphy's Law at work!
    Lovely haiku!

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  2. carol l mckennaJanuary 30, 2013 at 5:47 AM

    Lovely romantic haiku ~

    Carol of : A Creative Harbor

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  3. AnonymousJanuary 30, 2013 at 7:28 AM

    awwww that's so sweet... yes, my boyfriend couldn't understand a damn thing that i write either lol

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  4. The Write GirlJanuary 30, 2013 at 7:28 AM

    Such a delicate and beautiful haiku. Hope you recite it to your love.

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  5. MarkJanuary 30, 2013 at 8:11 AM

    My spouse is the same way as the love of your life: She doesn't care a whit about what I write. Oh, well!

    Silence the Birdsong

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  6. JazzbumpaJanuary 30, 2013 at 9:42 AM

    Yes, sweet and touching.
    We writers are a bit esoteric, I guess.

    Cheers!
    JzB

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  7. UnknownJanuary 30, 2013 at 12:14 PM

    Sweet Dedication :)

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  8. Gemma WisemanJanuary 30, 2013 at 1:30 PM

    If only he knew what a saviour he is to you! Quietly beautiful!

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  9. AnonymousJanuary 30, 2013 at 3:08 PM

    I take it he hasn't subscribed to your Blog then?
    Love work, thank you for sharing :)

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    1. PratibhaJanuary 30, 2013 at 5:14 PM

      he has subscribed. but since i write too often , he takes a little time in reading :)
      This he has been made to read and the explanation has been asked ;)

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  10. Keith's RamblingsJanuary 30, 2013 at 5:23 PM

    Lovely words, but it was the dedication that made me smile! I know exactly what you mean.

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  11. ChèvrefeuilleJanuary 30, 2013 at 7:15 PM

    Romance caught in a haiku on birdsong awesome take on today's prompt. Thank you Nimue.

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  12. joanneJanuary 31, 2013 at 1:04 AM

    the last line is deep....'He' has potential!

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  13. brudbergJanuary 31, 2013 at 2:31 AM

    And my love poem to my girl friends are also unread. Very nice imagery,

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  14. BerowneJanuary 31, 2013 at 4:57 AM

    Witty and engaging. Well donc.

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  15. Woman'n'BeyondFebruary 1, 2013 at 7:28 PM

    I liked both the haiku and your quote in the end. Nice!

    Lord’s Play

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  16. WritingsForLifeFebruary 2, 2013 at 8:49 AM

    Aww... this is so beautiful :-)

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  17. Eliz FrankFebruary 6, 2013 at 6:35 AM

    This is terrific... Loves your choice of words too. :-)' Following you on GFC! :-)
    Eliz

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