blank ,
speechless ..
these were just
EXPRESSIONS;
until his words
tumbled in my heart,
breaking the ties
I so cherished;
the molten lava
turning me into
a pool of tears
==
Prompted @ OSI , Open Link Night
"Breaking the ties I so cherished," Nimue, I could actually see it. Ain't that just like love? Your heart so steady and sure, beating to your own rhythm and then BAM! Comes love, as Billie used to sing, nothing can be done...
ReplyDeleteSo nice to read you today. Love Amy
the molten lava turning you into a pool of tears...oh wow..what an image..
ReplyDeleteyou def capture the impact of those words on you...from where you were before and then after...
ReplyDeleteHope it wasn't that hot haha great verse.
ReplyDeletequite steamy, that lava.
ReplyDeleteSigh - happens to all of us.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully put.
the molten lava turning me into a pool of tears...beautifully expressed emotion. - Kat/@beingmama
ReplyDelete...sadly normal to be abnormally silent in this not so rare cases of separation... ah... smiles...
ReplyDeleteOh dear. You put it beautifully, but it's still very sad.
ReplyDeletePoem captures the scene very well. How his words touched and hurt your deepest feelings.
ReplyDeleteexcellent write
ReplyDeletemuch love...
the molten lava
ReplyDeleteturning me into
a pool of tears
Loved the comparison you made here! Beautifully written :)