Friday, March 15, 2013

Voice

She was careful not to let her hood slip from her slender frame. Its a mistake, her sister had said in carefree tone, but she still had come . Hugging herself tight for a moment , she let herself enter the spotlight. She felt herself free as her voice filled the packed halls for the first time.

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9 comments:

  1. I like it, a story of courage. Nicely written.

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  2. This works well as a narrative and just something very cool to read. Thanks!

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  3. Lady Nimue...
    The voice was greater than the singer?
    There's more to this than meets the eye
    Loved your vocal 55
    Thanks for playing and your wonderful support
    And please have a Kick Ass Week End

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  4. good read, there is so much scope for further expansion, if you choose to


    much love...

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    1. Maybe someday I would. When again I would need such courage for myself.

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  6. I love the questions this story leaves - why the hood, why was it a mistake? Yet I can feel her exultation. Nicely done.

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  7. I hope she removed her hood as the entire hall echoed with her voice :)

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  8. This is a beautiful image - leaving so many questions unanswered though!

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