Monday, December 3, 2012

The eye



The "eye of dead" was not to be dug out.The evil spirits laughed as soon as it saw light. He thought it would resurrect his dead lover when the eye levelled and stopped. He sat for weeks next to the preserved body.He died waiting. The eye took another soul.

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 Written for Magpie Tales , G-Man's friday flash55 , Easy Street Prompts
Photo Credits : Magpie tales

13 comments:

  1. oh I like this....nicely done and thanks for sharing

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  2. Well done, and with a powerful ending...

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  3. huh, def intriguing...sounds like there might be quite the story behind this....

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  4. I always threaten to dig out my sons' eyes with a grapefruit spoon...

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  5. Nimue....Don't look!
    Very intriguing my friend.
    Loved your dark 55
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

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  6. Whoa- nice and dark! sucked 'em right in, drained 'em right out!

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  7. Some things are best left buried. Excellent cautionary tale.

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  8. Great 55! And that's a great photo prompt. Much can be said about a metronome, even without an eye!

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  9. Waiting for weeks beside a dead lover, it seems the eye drove him to madness before death. Perhaps he was mad before. Lots of questions, this one has me thinking. Well done.

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