on the edge of life
she looks back at music played
the smile of spring
Prompted @ September Heights (day 5)
Inspired from the following music prompt given by Elizebth at Musical Notes Poetry prompt :
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2N_tmH6y7ng
(Image source)
Very nice I love the surprise use of sppring at the end in a haiku about autumn and memory. Very nice.
ReplyDeleteSome memories are a hope for times to be same again :)
ReplyDeleteAutumn is interconnected with reminiscence.
ReplyDeleteI like your unusual take of Autumn with Hope.
Am on a hope and smile diagnosis ;)
DeleteAh! This is such a wonderful haiku. Love the way you have used music to connect Autumn with Spring.
ReplyDeletelovely interconnection..beautiful
ReplyDeleteam glad this worked :)
DeleteNostalgic!...Beautiful one!
ReplyDeleteThis is lovely. I like poetry that looks at the seasons of someone's life.
ReplyDeleteInteresting caption you gave :)
DeleteA spring that makes us want to look past winter and forget it's arrival :)
ReplyDeletenot forget winter , but make it warm with old seson's memories !
DeleteBravo, nimue!! :)
ReplyDeleteSeptember Heights - Autumn
I like that backward look!
ReplyDeleteMy Lady Autumn
Seasons whirl past like the Music Box Dancer, then fade into memory. Wonderful photo, beautiful smile and verse. You captured a great deal with few words,
ReplyDeleteElizabeth
http://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/
You related the images too :)
ReplyDeleteI love what came to you from the song...wasn't it interesting with no lyrics to direct? I love these music prompts!
ReplyDelete~Paula