am here :)
I knew you would be !Thanks :)
very interesting!
thanks much !
Nimue -- it is good to "see you" again. "he paints her blank words" is a great ending line for this Haiku on loneliness!! ~ Becca(sorry I deleted your comment while moderation)
:) Really beautiful! :)
glad to see you here Nivu :)
I really like this. You paint well with your words
:) thank you !
I like indexed in her sigh...nice one ~
me too ! :D
What a great first line!A Long Loneliness
Glad you liked it !
indexed in her sigh is an awesome opening line! You know how to pack a punch in a few short words
Haiku makes you do that :D
Beautiful haiku written/painted with so less words ... very well done Nimue. Very strong loneliness.
Loneliness makes you strong :)
he paints her blank words! friend??!intriguing I personally feel here is nothing better than a writer provoking us to think!lovely great job there!
whoa ! that was a really good compliment. thanks :)
Love the poem and look of you new blog.
yay ! so so good to see you here Martin :)
So poetic in few words...Very beautiful!
Such a dark dramatic haiku! Beautifully written.
Any thought ? Anything ...
am here :)
ReplyDeleteI knew you would be !
DeleteThanks :)
very interesting!
ReplyDeletethanks much !
DeleteNimue -- it is good to "see you" again. "he paints her blank words" is a great ending line for this Haiku on loneliness!!
ReplyDelete~ Becca
(sorry I deleted your comment while moderation)
:) Really beautiful! :)
ReplyDeleteglad to see you here Nivu :)
DeleteI really like this. You paint well with your words
ReplyDelete:) thank you !
DeleteI like indexed in her sigh...nice one ~
ReplyDeleteme too ! :D
DeleteWhat a great first line!
ReplyDeleteA Long Loneliness
Glad you liked it !
Deleteindexed in her sigh is an awesome opening line! You know how to pack a punch in a few short words
ReplyDeleteHaiku makes you do that :D
DeleteBeautiful haiku written/painted with so less words ... very well done Nimue. Very strong loneliness.
ReplyDeleteLoneliness makes you strong :)
Deletehe paints her blank words! friend??!
ReplyDeleteintriguing I personally feel here is nothing better than a writer provoking us to think!
lovely great job there!
whoa ! that was a really good compliment. thanks :)
DeleteLove the poem and look of you new blog.
ReplyDeleteyay ! so so good to see you here Martin :)
DeleteSo poetic in few words...Very beautiful!
ReplyDeleteSuch a dark dramatic haiku! Beautifully written.
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