Tuesday, February 19, 2013

confessions


sugar coated words
hurt no less;no more my love
truth sets the heart free


life forever sets
your deeds against icebergs
kept safe by wisdom


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Inspired by Haiku Height , Thursday Theme , Carpe Diem

13 comments:

  1. Simple yet beautifully crafted...

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  2. I really like the wisdom of the second one. :-)

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  3. Hurtful words are still hurtful, even if spoken sweetly.

    Lady Wisdom

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  4. But what if it's the truth that's hurtful
    And the words cannot disguise that simple fact
    What then is the wise person to do?

    JzB

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  5. There is food for thought in your second one :your deeds set against icebergs" It is true we can not change our deeds one they are past!

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  6. Sugar coating. Good. I also like the iceberg.

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    1. i really like truth sets the heart free - really nice

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  7. Beautiful poetry. Thanks for sharing.

    http://joycelansky.blogspot.com/2013/02/theme-thursday-confessions.html

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  8. And some truth can also enslave the heart.

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  9. Sometimes sugar coated words do hurt more because we do not see what is being said under that coating. Then when we find out the truth it is very hard for us to accept what the true meaning is. And I guess our hearts are set free once the truth is out there for us to see but we are still hurt.

    Such beautiful Haiku's for you to share with us for this weeks Theme Thursday. May your weekend be blessed with lots of truth and love from those you around you.

    God bless.

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