Friday, September 7, 2012

My muse






a leap here and there
across reality, she stretched
her dusk colored wings

a dark shadow today
she slept over the mist clouds;
rains tomorrow.

yesterday she flew
light speed of thoughts at me
undressing words free.

shapeless,senseless
you my love, my life,my love
wonderful mess.



Written for September Height (day 7 ) , Dverse Poetics

16 comments:

  1. life can be a wonderful mess sometimes

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  2. smiles...it can be a beautiful mess...and oh how fast she can move eh?

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  3. Some people can seem like a disorderly mess ~

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  4. Beautiful! Such a fickle being is a muse. It really is a wonderful mess she's given you.

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  5. Muse/mess. So true. Art of all forms is messy. Love this.

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  6. Love this set ... you've got to watch that muse ... playful havoc abound!! September Heights - Agility

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  7. "wonderful mess" Love that and the rest of the haiku as well.

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  8. I think sometimes, it's good to live in your imagination :) beautiful. the muse and you.. :D

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  9. Beautiful.

    and please be back on wordpress as you see this doesn't have a like button.

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    1. hahah ..
      next time , u can simply write : LIKE

      :D

      thanks so much for the comment dear :)

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  10. Beautiful.

    and please be back on wordpress as you see this doesn't have a like button.

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  11. Like!!!

    ""Then, anger
    was a crease in the brow
    and silence
    a catastrophe.
    Then, making up
    was a mutual smile
    and a glance
    a gift.
    Now, just look at this mess
    that you've made of that love.
    You grovel at my feet
    and I berate you
    and can't let my anger go.""
    AMARU

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  12. Lovely!! I so enjoy your word choices! You create magic with them.

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