Oh how hard that is - not to be able to share your words. I like your last line "she feeds his silence" Sad though it is.
It gets very hard. and harder to break out of the shell ..
Wow, what an amazing take on this prompt! Last line is wonderful!
This is awesome. There are several different scenarios I can think of, and they are alll so sad.
Not really .. She might give her words to him :) Of course its hard to do even that initially!
Feeding silence ... wow !!!
"words kept aside" is a sad thing! Beautiful haiku, lady Nimue :-)Mariya Kolevahttp://phoenix-em.com/mariyakoleva
oh yes , thats a cruel thing for words :)
This is really nice!!
She needs to quit starving herself...and write...Starve
What a sad haiku ... don't have the strength to find the words of love. I like the last line.
feeding silence ...amazing!!
Fascinating the way we all have different angles on starvation.
To give up one love for another, that's saddening, but I give it to her, she's a sweetheart I think.
Excellent work. I too have been there. Not to share words and thoughts is painful.
The muse is constant. Wonderful poem.
Nice, L. Nimue. Sounds like a relationship on its downhill slope. Where will be the bottom?Jim's OSI..
this is exquisite, Nimue!♥ dani
Any thought ? Anything ...
Oh how hard that is - not to be able to share your words. I like your last line "she feeds his silence" Sad though it is.
ReplyDeleteIt gets very hard. and harder to break out of the shell ..
DeleteWow, what an amazing take on this prompt! Last line is wonderful!
ReplyDeleteThis is awesome. There are several different scenarios I can think of, and they are alll so sad.
ReplyDeleteNot really .. She might give her words to him :)
DeleteOf course its hard to do even that initially!
Feeding silence ... wow !!!
ReplyDelete"words kept aside" is a sad thing! Beautiful haiku, lady Nimue :-)
ReplyDeleteMariya Koleva
http://phoenix-em.com/mariyakoleva
oh yes , thats a cruel thing for words :)
DeleteThis is really nice!!
ReplyDeleteShe needs to quit starving herself...and write...
ReplyDeleteStarve
What a sad haiku ... don't have the strength to find the words of love. I like the last line.
ReplyDeletefeeding silence ...amazing!!
ReplyDeleteFascinating the way we all have different angles on starvation.
ReplyDeleteTo give up one love for another, that's saddening, but I give it to her, she's a sweetheart I think.
ReplyDeleteExcellent work. I too have been there. Not to share words and thoughts is painful.
ReplyDeleteThe muse is constant. Wonderful poem.
ReplyDeleteNice, L. Nimue. Sounds like a relationship on its downhill slope. Where will be the bottom?
ReplyDeleteJim's OSI
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this is exquisite, Nimue!
ReplyDelete♥
dani