Wednesday, September 12, 2012

Rains

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12 comments:

  1. Vinay Leo R.September 13, 2012 at 12:41 AM

    A need and desire for rain.. Yeah..

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  2. joanneSeptember 13, 2012 at 5:18 AM

    fabulous haiga!

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  3. Sheilagh LeeSeptember 13, 2012 at 5:54 AM

    I love the thought put in the picture of the need well done both picture and haiku

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  4. AnonymousSeptember 13, 2012 at 6:10 AM

    Wow, I started my poem with "desire becomes need" also.
    But after 10 re-writes, that disappeared. -- you know how that goes.
    I love the hope hinged on sky and lethal heat. Nice

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    1. PratibhaSeptember 13, 2012 at 11:16 AM

      thanks :) I know how the words usually dont act as per our thoughts ..

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  5. AnonymousSeptember 13, 2012 at 7:15 AM

    most excellent!

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  6. J Cosmo NewberySeptember 13, 2012 at 4:58 PM

    Some need, indeed.

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  7. RMPSeptember 16, 2012 at 2:05 AM

    tight piece...I could feel the heat as desire becomes need.

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