some images you come across,
and can not think of
new words,
or lines,
'cause
some one wrote
better dreams
that seem to sweep
across your mind
and the images
come alive.
As soon as I saw the image prompt for this week , I was reminded of a poem by Ibeingme. It took me a while but I did dig it out for you. ( Linked to his name )
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Written for Magpie tales
Also linked to Open Link night @ dVerse Poetics
'Crossroads' is a nice counterpoint to your beautiful poem ... I can see why you were reminded of it.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful writing...
ReplyDeletewhy say it again if its been said well enough....unless you have something new to add....really nice homage to their piece as well...
ReplyDeleteYes, I agree in this case, very nice all the way around.
ReplyDeleteThe great stumbling block of the poet: others have done it before us and done it better! I love the humility in your poem.
ReplyDeletethanks viv. some times you can not forget the words you read :)
Delete...and the images come alive... you hit it right... loved it..
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Nice one...The image is such that many interpretations comes true. Good take!
ReplyDeleteThis is lovely.
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