Sunday, December 2, 2012

Winter winds

Withering wind blows -
storm from your memories
flashes of your touch

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Written for Carpe Diem , Haiku Heights

14 comments:

  1. you have beautifully romanticized the chilly winds....

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  2. I got imagery of a chilling type of love.

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  3. "Flashes of your touch" Classic line - evoked lightning for me.

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  4. This is the kind of withering wind we could all do without!

    Withering Wind

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    1. yeah , if the memories make you sad , I wish so :)

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  5. I love it specially the storm from your memories ~

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  6. flashes of your touch...Lovely line.....Nostalgic!

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  7. Like memories of a winter where the protagonist was in her lover's arms.. beautiful.

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